big goof

After I posted the 'possible contest entry' I realized I shouldn't have. Having to edit it to fit the 500 word max, I took out all the wrong stuff. Now it sounds really bad. All telling and no showing. A Romance Writer no-no. Oh well, it'll give them a good laugh. There were plenty of great entries. Had I read all of them posted before mine, I would have realized I didn't have a snowballs chance in hell of even getting an honorable mention. Duh... What the hell was I thinking.